THIS IS ONE OF MY POETIC CREATIONS:
WHAT WAS WEAVED BY GOD AS A FAIRY TALE... ALL OF A SUDDEN STARTED LOOKING SO PALE...
WHAT WAS VIEWED AS A PRECIOUS GIFT FROM THE LORD...WAS RUINED BY THE WRATH OF THE CRUELTY’S SWORD
THE LITTLE GIRL FELT SHE WOULD BE SHATTERED IN THIS WORLD WHERE KINDNESS HARDLY MATTERED...
THEN GOD CALLED "LOVE" HER PRETTY NAME...
TO LOVE ALL MANKIND BECAME HER AIM...
AND THE GIRL STEPPED INTO THE WORLD...
WITH A FATIH WHICH SHE WOULD TIGHTLY HOLD
TO TOUCH EVERY GLOOMY HEART...
AND WASH HATRED OUT....
AND LET THE STREAM OF LOVE ABUNDANTLY FLOW
AND RELEASE SMILES LIKE FLUTTERING BUTTERFLIES TO SET EVERY HEART AGLOW.
16 comments:
spOhh great.....no doubt u are a creative writer....
hi! that was a beautifully written piece.What you are trying to say is so relevant in today's circumstances...
keep posting :)
wt a sweet thought...
nice piece... :)
You have penned your thoughts very nicely ... Keep this good work flying high ...
Right from heart those words come... and when you write them you know wat it is and when someone reads them they feel wat it really means....!!
Innocent thoughts put down so neatly and perfect in every sense. The fact is that most of us have seen things happening around and with us, but seldom wrap it around as a part and carry it along... learning something in the process. Great one!
creative!!! really nice :)
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a thread of couplets...
nicely penned...
:)
amazing stuff... brilliant.
well expressed..liked it. Keep writing such beautiful stuff.
thats really awsome writing loved it keep blogging!!!!
Nice one abt love and hope with a lot of rhyming words..
Great work...
Great work with the words...have nicely penned down ur thoughts abt hope..
Will hope to see more of ur works
TO TOUCH EVERY GLOOMY HEART...
AND WASH HATRED OUT....
I like it very much... Keep it up..
Cheers
Randeep
A very nice poem neha..
keep rocking
nice piece of writing
A wonderful poem!Would like to see more of your writings!:)
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